How can we describe diction in writing?

When analyzing diction in writing, it is important to go beyond simply stating, “The writer used diction.” Since diction refers to the words on the page, this observation is redundant. Instead, focus on how specific word choices contribute to a specific tone, mood, effect, or purpose.

For example:

  • Avoid: “The writer used diction.”
  • Instead, say: “The writer creates a melancholic tone through the use of somber and reflective word choices, such as ‘fading,’ ‘hollow,’ and ‘solitude.’”
  • Or, “The language of the text is somber and reflective, contributing to a melancholic tone through word choices like ‘fading,’ ‘hollow,’ and ‘solitude.’

When discussing diction, use precise adjectives (e.g., plain, abstract, flowery, grandiose, etc.) to classify the writer’s word choice.